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Friday, October 7, 2011

Writercize Challenge by Beth...My Entry

Okay Beth, I'm game!  Gonna give it a go...My entry in the Writercize challenge Beth issued today.

The marriage is over. They both were aware of it.
Walking away from 15 years is very hard indeed.
The house, car, all the stuff to divide.
No kids. Thank goodness. Just memories, lots.
She wiped her eyes, hugging him.
He hugged back. No tears.
Over and done, finally.
What comes next
For each~
Tomorrow.

Jo
 
 

18 comments:

  1. Excellent! I have no idea how you do this. Are we sure we share the same gene pool? Maybe Mike and I were right. Nah. Love ya.

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  2. I'm sure! Thanks, Sis. You and Mike were NOT right, Mom says. :)

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  3. Superb job! You did great, Jo, and thanks so much for giving it a whirl! :O)

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  4. Thanks miss Beth...it was really fun!

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  5. It's amazing how so few words can strike so many chords. I loved this! Well done, Jo!

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  6. Tight. You Jo, have talent. (And you are absolutely correct, Mom's word is law.)

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  7. DwV...thanks so much.

    GpD...*blushing* I appreciate that so much. And she is always right!

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  8. Sad but so true in many lives.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2011/10/silly-sunday-redneck-hunting-accident.html

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  9. Excellent, loved this. A few words says it all.

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  10. Excellent ten-to-one!! I'm very impressed. :)

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  11. Joyce...It is! Thx.

    Paula...Thanks and I need to remember that more often.

    Susan...Thank you so much. I love impressing you! he he he

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  12. 55 words in descending sentences is kind of fun...but not an easy task!

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  13. I loved these and you did especially well! I think we should something similar one day soon!

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    1. I liked this one a lot. Some of them can take the fun out of writing, when they are just too confining or too much work. I'm a bit lazy when it comes to challenges. But I def think another one is due.
      And thank you very much.

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  14. Sad but true. Something I can relate too. Nicely done.

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    1. I know. Me, too. Thank you. ♥

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  15. WhOOhOOooot, that was fantastic Jo. Fun too!

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    1. They are fun. I did several just for fun, this is the only one I posted. The rest got the ole delete button! ha ha ha

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