tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post9062637813983128451..comments2023-09-17T15:44:55.446-04:00Comments on My Wandering Mind: Pick a Line From a Book and start writing...Johttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-81037898110876635582012-05-26T14:20:30.963-04:002012-05-26T14:20:30.963-04:00Thank you Linda...I do that a lot. ♥Thank you Linda...I do that a lot. ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-65311792834882018202012-05-26T14:17:56.927-04:002012-05-26T14:17:56.927-04:00Nice story, Jo!
You had me on the edge of my seat...Nice story, Jo!<br /><br />You had me on the edge of my seat! I really like the way you finished the story with your opening line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-36964187968373014182012-05-25T21:43:19.109-04:002012-05-25T21:43:19.109-04:00You're so silly! Thanks for always being on m...You're so silly! Thanks for always being on my side! ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-1116769210787739952012-05-25T21:17:11.802-04:002012-05-25T21:17:11.802-04:00LOL sweet Jesus..yup another book in the making?? ...LOL sweet Jesus..yup another book in the making?? THANKS ANGELA!! lol :0) amazing write JoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-58593463937229759292012-05-24T19:34:10.999-04:002012-05-24T19:34:10.999-04:00You don't have one? Hmmmm...who says they are...You don't have one? Hmmmm...who says they are normal? I so appreciate you always running over and saying something wonderful! ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-86395294591954380842012-05-24T16:24:48.449-04:002012-05-24T16:24:48.449-04:00Like many before me, I want more! Why would a nor...Like many before me, I want more! Why would a normal couple have a hidden stairway in the closet and a hidden room? Write that novel my friend. Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-41541032283139015112012-05-22T23:29:17.422-04:002012-05-22T23:29:17.422-04:00Thanks! Breathe now, plz. ♥Thanks! Breathe now, plz. ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-36744276575662353212012-05-22T23:28:16.524-04:002012-05-22T23:28:16.524-04:00This was amazing. I could hardly breath. Well done...This was amazing. I could hardly breath. Well done.Laura Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04484480915813337237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-28857998563263324102012-05-22T20:07:11.741-04:002012-05-22T20:07:11.741-04:00Something is crazy here! your comment showed up 5...Something is crazy here! your comment showed up 5 times! LOL Thank you very much and I am deleting the excess copies. ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-28247180792802475282012-05-22T19:21:25.989-04:002012-05-22T19:21:25.989-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02968775323161746642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-91824551470957425062012-05-22T19:21:19.474-04:002012-05-22T19:21:19.474-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02968775323161746642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-52508653947346102582012-05-22T19:21:14.271-04:002012-05-22T19:21:14.271-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02968775323161746642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-50055397580193753052012-05-22T19:21:07.272-04:002012-05-22T19:21:07.272-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02968775323161746642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-40468050413415032762012-05-22T19:20:54.357-04:002012-05-22T19:20:54.357-04:00Wow Jo, loved it! Scared me all the way through, m...Wow Jo, loved it! Scared me all the way through, making sure all the doors are locked tonight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02968775323161746642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-24702038328191261292012-05-22T16:22:29.056-04:002012-05-22T16:22:29.056-04:00I nearly did! I may explore this later, I loved t...I nearly did! I may explore this later, I loved the characters and their possibilities. Who knows?<br />Thank you, Beth...♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-33293503470322067002012-05-22T15:45:08.459-04:002012-05-22T15:45:08.459-04:00I love that your line came from Angela's book!...I love that your line came from Angela's book! Lots and lots of action here...you could easily expand this puppy into a full book!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-23649095168892401792012-05-22T14:59:06.826-04:002012-05-22T14:59:06.826-04:00LOL...I practically did have when I started writin...LOL...I practically did have when I started writing. I had to edit and edit and edit and it's still way too long, but I couldn't really abbreviate any more and still tell the story, I didn't think!<br /><br />That's a great sentence...thanks for providing it. ♥ Gonna read the whole book this week-end.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-80391801320433921052012-05-22T14:53:11.239-04:002012-05-22T14:53:11.239-04:00OF COURSE it's OK with me that your starter se...OF COURSE it's OK with me that your starter sentence was from my novel. Great job! Now i I want to know more about the intruder and his wife and why they had the kind of relationship that would lead him to terrorize two households of strangers. And I want to more about the protagonist and why she allowed the landscaper to obscure the entry to her home. Does she have self image issues? Why did the neighbors build the shelter, esp. camouflaged as it was. Shoot, you might have a novel there. : - )angelaparsonmyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00444590717139156975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-4687810955775690882012-05-22T14:09:02.074-04:002012-05-22T14:09:02.074-04:00I haven't even started to read it yet! LOL Bu...I haven't even started to read it yet! LOL But I did read the sample and loved that sentence. Thanks, Amy.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-78025547941094283962012-05-22T13:59:18.564-04:002012-05-22T13:59:18.564-04:00Loved that you used Angela's book! Reeled me ...Loved that you used Angela's book! Reeled me in from the get-go. Nicely done Jo.Amy Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10613446967051981724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-37346319071776569312012-05-22T12:47:06.650-04:002012-05-22T12:47:06.650-04:00You make me laugh! Glad you liked it and I do have...You make me laugh! Glad you liked it and I do have a dark and freaky side, you know.<br />Thanks so much Mimi. ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-71431376311740188202012-05-22T12:46:22.287-04:002012-05-22T12:46:22.287-04:00Thank you and I will return that compliment! Just...Thank you and I will return that compliment! Just returned from your entry and loved it! ♥<br />Hoping you find all the love an support any writer could seek, right here at GBE2.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-80941467436125785672012-05-22T12:45:34.436-04:002012-05-22T12:45:34.436-04:00Holy Crap! LOL love it. You'll be the pm I se...Holy Crap! LOL love it. You'll be the pm I send, promise! :) But, please breathe in the meantime, it could be many years postmortem! ♥Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-69937473930214112032012-05-22T12:44:32.894-04:002012-05-22T12:44:32.894-04:00Breathe in and breathe out. It's okay, now. ♥...Breathe in and breathe out. It's okay, now. ♥ Thank you, Paula.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8032376069218624542.post-35148590960514833262012-05-22T10:59:08.059-04:002012-05-22T10:59:08.059-04:00What the hell Jo!!! I LOVE this!!!What the hell Jo!!! I LOVE this!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com