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Saturday, January 21, 2012

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Howling wind outside makes Jake curl up, cover up, trying to hide from the real world. He's a brave and aggressive guy on most days, but the bitter cold of a snow storm causes him to recoil every time. His bravery is more apparent on warmer sunny days that warm his muscles.

The fire is roaring and it holds his gaze. Cuddled nearby is Sadie, the cold queen. She is loving the sound of the wind howling around their over-heated home. He will protect her at all costs. That's who he is and what he does. Her job is to be cute and make him look macho. She is good at her job.

Hunger is beginning to overtake him and no one seems interested in fetching him a meal. Sadie and the other inhabitants are napping and Jake is listening to his hunger pangs. Who's going to feed this poor hungry hero?

What's a guy to do? Head for the kitchen, the food is there, the answer to his dilemma is food. Looking around he spots the storage container, "Turkey, Grain Free". That must be it. Sniffing. Touching with a paw, pulling back, listening. Nothing. He touches it again,  it moves, just a little rocking.  He hooks a nail in the edge, by accident. Voila! It tumbles over, lid opens. Grain free turkey kibbles spill out into his face. For just a moment he thinks he may have died and gone to heaven. Then he hears it. Click noises coming his way. Sadie gives him the look. He might be in big giant trouble in a few, but right now, LET'S  EAT!

 Jo

15 comments:

  1. 300 word challenge...character, situation and resolution. Not as easy as it sounded. But not impossible. :)

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  2. Great job! It reminded me of my in-laws dog, Honeebunch. She was this beautiful chocolate lab and one day, she was left in the garage and she got into the 40 lb bag of dog food. When my in-laws returned home, she was laying beside it and had nearly consumed the entire thing! Poor girl, she couldn't even get up she had stuffed herself so silly! ;)

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    1. They are brain powered by food. He has never been hungry in his almost 12 years, but he always thinks he is! lol

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  3. Once again an interesting read. I found the best way to write 300 words is to write and then edit to the 300 words. But you managed very nicely. An enjoyable short story. I loved it.

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    1. That's what I do as well. thanks for stopping by!

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  4. I love dogs and you've nailed this little guy's hunger.

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    1. He's been asking for food ever since he adopted us. His doc tells him all the time that rat terriers are thin and svelte doggies, but he is much too muscular for any of that svelte talk!

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    1. I assume you are talking about the masculine and handsome Jake! Cute, would be Sadie, he is way handsome! lol Thanks.

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  6. Good job! I just knew this was going to be a challenge for you. hee hee

    Love it! I had a little Jake many years ago. Gone almost 10 years, I still miss him. So...my mental picture of your Jake looked just like mine.

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    1. He's a sweet boy! Oops, I mean a macho man! lol Thanks Darlene.

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  7. *grin* Yeah... put his nail in 'by accident'. I suspect he's smarter than that. Loved the story.

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    1. He's very good at playing dumb. Thank you. And such a macho man. Right now he is on guard on the sofa because his sissy, Sadie is napping AGAIN.

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  8. I recognize that dog behavior. The poor starving dog, quick call the ASPCA before she wastes away.

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    1. He is in no danger of wasting, let me tell you. lol You should maybe call the ASPCA cuz him's overfed!
      Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.♥

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